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joniksPM
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Struggling to make my product descriptions more engaging
Aug 13, 2025 8:25 AM
Non-member Joined: Mar 22, 2024
Posts: 106
I’ve been running my online store for a year now, but my product descriptions feel flat and don’t seem to inspire purchases. I’ve tried rewriting them multiple times, but nothing seems to click with my audience. Has anyone found a practical way to make copywriting more impactful for sales without sounding too “salesy”?

aseraw12PM
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Aug 13, 2025 1:29 PM
Non-member Joined: Nov 16, 2024
Posts: 138
It might help to research some copywriting frameworks and test them. Sometimes the problem isn’t the style but the structure and flow of the message.
binassikarPM
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Aug 13, 2025 6:39 PM
Non-member Joined: Mar 19, 2024
Posts: 173
When I had this issue, I realized my descriptions lacked a real emotional pull and clear benefits for the buyer. I found a great breakdown here: https://clicksy.io/blog/why-copywriting-is-important-for-your-business-success/, which explained why focusing on benefits over features can dramatically change engagement. I applied their tips by starting each product description with a relatable problem, then showing exactly how my product solves it. I also started using more sensory and descriptive language instead of just technical specs, which helped customers imagine using the product. Another key change was including mini customer stories or testimonials directly in the description, which built more trust. Within a month, I saw a noticeable jump in both click-through rates and conversions. It wasn’t about overhyping — just being intentional with words and making them connect to real needs.