Enjoy

http://www.ebaumsworld.com/flash/play/80730302/


will kindly accept criticism

thats an improvement there, but a coupla points

1. the timings on the screen changes could be slowed by 2/3 secs to allow the eye to register all the info.

2. the DDD should have no spacings and also you could have cod5 war has found its' home or DDD true war is fought here.

just personal thoughts, but i like your ambition. remember from little acorns grow big oak trees

harps

yah I understand the timing issue...it is hard for me to really know because I know what it is going to say making it easier to read in a second whereas someone that has no clue what is coming up next will have a tougher time to read it.

I like the spacing...i think it adds a little "flare"

another effect to look at is the possibilty of the D's dropping in individually. this would give the flare you requirw as the DDD logo is with no spacing at all and artistic license doesn't portray the logo in it's correct fashion.
as for the timing issue the timing is very important. if you have it running too fast the message is lost as the viewer is still tryimg to figure out the message of the last scene when the next scene is finishing. adding the extra coupla seconds loses the feeling of the viewer being rushed to take in all the info.

i also had another thought about a possible catch phrase. you could try "DDD the art of war reinvented!"

your first draft is very good and don't misconstrue by comments these are purely of a constructive manner.

i will work on it some more...flash can be a bit tricky since i dont have complete understanding of it

Very nice! It needs some in game action.

nice indeed but like Harps say , a little bit too fast

very nice

Great idea, great work, mrBarbeque. Now my criticism::D Speed is ok, I think other transitions of the Charts/Copy can be helpfully. And what do you think about more WAR-Atmosphere or effects, so that you know/or can a little bit to divine, what kind of server or clan is DDD?

Grtz KK

nice to be a little helpfull

I think that was really good. Did you do that yourself or did Mr. Mitt and Mr. Tongs assist you?